Monday, February 11, 2008

Haiku - I Love 'Ku

The topic for this week's posting at One Deep Breath was love. A fun one.

Familiar yet new
I can’t move; can barely breathe
Your blue eyes again

10 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

So touching and real - breath catching!

SandyCarlson said...

No there's a love poem!
Writing in Faith: Poems

Everydaythings said...

woo hoo now theres a love thang! soo romantic! anyone you know????

Sean Boyd said...

Oh for sure, the ku is for my dear wife of 13 years, Kristy. I know those eyes inside and out, yet I'm still caught...

Crafty Green Poet said...

true love, very well put

qualcosa di bello said...

now that will surely make your wife swoon!!

little wing writer said...

amazing love how can it be... our children our life... beautiful

spacedlaw said...

With just a catch of breath.
Beautiful.

Andree said...

Wow. This is wonderful. I enjoy thinking about the events that motivated it: there are so many. My One Deep Breath is here.

Nancy Bea Miller said...

This feels very fresh and real...excellent!